Проверьте, пожалуйста, мини-сочинение про работу родителей на ошибки .
My mother has a full-time job as a cook. She has to wear a uniform at work: a white coat and apron. She has weekly shift, but sometimes she works overtime. Sometimes, my mother has too many orders. But even so, she manages to deadline. When I asked my mother would she like to work in another place, for example desk job, she answers no. Mom said she loves her job, especially bake sweets. So at home I always plenty of goodies.
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отличное сочинение! Но есть некоторые недочеты. Я бы сказала так :
When I ASK my mother would she like to work in another place, for example desk job, she answers no. (либо when i askED....she answerED)
Mom said she loves her job, especially bake sweets. В этом предложении тоже надо выбрать одно время, я бы сказала так: Mom SAYS, she loves her job, especially TO bake sweets
И последнее - So at home I always plenty of goodies. Тут пропущен глагол, я бы сказала так: So at home I always HAVE plenty of goodies.
When I ASK my mother would she like to work in another place, for example desk job, she answers no. (либо when i askED....she answerED)
Mom said she loves her job, especially bake sweets. В этом предложении тоже надо выбрать одно время, я бы сказала так: Mom SAYS, she loves her job, especially TO bake sweets
И последнее - So at home I always plenty of goodies. Тут пропущен глагол, я бы сказала так: So at home I always HAVE plenty of goodies.
stkristina:
огромное спасибо!
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